Friday, November 16, 2012

ALLOW ME TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF by Paul Holbrook

A business man and a drug addict form an unlikely friendship after a chance meeting and a mutual love for music. The odd couple begin to rely on each other as their usual mundane lives begin to crumble around them.


How It Works

Email Rob the first ten pages of your feature length screenplay (in pdf. format) along with a logline and title. Every Friday, one of our reviewers (or guests) posts one writer's work along with notes and a:

Rating

Trash It (Start over.)
Take Another Pass (You're onto something, but it needs more work.)
More Please (I'm hooked. What happens next?)
Somebody Shoot This!

Readers then comment on your work.


Paul was kind enough to allow me to post his pages today without a review. Also, he wants you to know that he is from the U.K.

ALLOW ME TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF by Paul Holbrook