I'd like to thank everyone who has taken the time to submit pages and share their thoughts. We'll be back next week with a review, but today we're celebrating our first year with the 1st 10 pages from 10 different writers below.
How It Works
Email Rob the first ten pages of your feature length screenplay (in pdf. format) along with a logline and title. Every Friday one of us (or a guest reviewer) posts one writer's work along with notes and a:
Rating
Trash It (Start over.)
Take Another Pass (You're onto something, but it needs more work.)
More Please (I'm hooked. What happens next?)
Somebody Shoot This!
Readers then vote and comment on your work.
Click here to > READ THEM ALL
ALUMNI NIGHT by Matthew Kane
A 19-year-old movie star ditches an
important Hollywood Christmas party to play in the "Alumni
Night" game of her high school comedy improv team — but
she gets one crazy night from hell — chased by paparazzi
and juggling three guys: the pop-star boyfriend who kicked her out
but wants her back, her high school sweetheart who still wants them
to be college sweethearts, and that adorable little 10th-grader who's
now a senior … and super hot!
AMAZON CON by Jeff Thomas (Title Page)
A two-bit hustler who gets himself
hired as translator on a jungle medical mission learns that the
missionaries want to poison the villagers.
BEFORE A FALL by Joshua Lee Andrew
Jones
Seduced, set up, ruined by a sex tape,
the new minister’s son dared to pursue a girl above his station and
was rewarded with humiliation so now he must turn the tables on the
person who destroyed his reputation.
DOGBITE by Paul Holbrook
Looking for a fresh start, a man with a
violent past moves his family to Small Town, New Mexico. When they
are tormented and abused by a sick and twisted psychopath, he is
forced back down the path of vengeance.
EPOCH by Cillian Daly
The crew of an interstellar ship, on an
eighty year mission, return to the solar system to face a devastating
mystery.
KATE by Eric N. Jones
How much is love worth? In this darker
modern take on Henry James's WASHINGTON SQUARE, shy billionaire
heiress KATE SLOPER finds out when she defies her tyrannical father,
Senator and high-powered businessman AUSTIN SLOPER, and engages in a
passionate relationship with the handsome, but rootless MORRIS
TOWNSEND.
LITTLE BANDITS by Michael DiMartino
A group of orphans steal priceless works of art to keep them from falling into the hands of the Germans and to save their orphanage.
SNIPER by Geoff Breedwell
A high school student must evade the
Sniper's cross-hairs during class, without telling anyone, or
everyone in his family dies.
TERRA INCOGNITA by Cillian Daly
A group of scientists and marines must
travel back in time to stop a cataclysmic event that could destroy
the galaxy.
THE BUTTON MAN by Robert Dillon
A hitman faces a tough choice
when he learns that the boss of a rival outfit, whom he's been
ordered to whack, is also the brother of the woman he loves.
TIMEKEEPER by Ari Gill
If you're a fan of Looper, 12 Monkeys,
Source Code, Deja Vu type of films - then you might see what I'm
trying to do with this.
