Welcome back for my second review for this week's Feedback Friday. If you haven't had the chance already, please scroll down below for today's earlier review!
In case this is your first time here, here is how Feedback Friday works. Email Robert Dillon a pdf version of the first 10 pages of your script and one of our reviewers will rate it based on the following:
Trash It (Start over.)
Take Another Pass (You're onto something, but it needs more work.)
More Please (I'm hooked. What happens next?)
Somebody Shoot This!
Bangers & Mash
by Crystal S. Adaway
Reviewed by Erman Baradi