Four lifeguards flee a health conscious gang leader and a cross-dressing detective, when they cover up the slaying of a drug dealer and keep his drugs and attache case.
Why should I read another screenwriting blog? You shouldn't; you should be writing. But, since you are here's:
How It Works
You email me the first ten pages of your feature length screenplay (in pdf. format) along with a logline and title. Every Friday, I post one writer's work along with notes and a:
Trash It (Start over.)
Take Another Pass (You're onto something, but it needs more work.)
More Please (I'm hooked. What happens next?)
Readers will also be able to vote and leave comments on your work. I've posted the first ten pages of BLACK WATER to get things started.
What do you think?
Next week's pages from:
The Boy In The Casket by Dan Dollar